'Feed the Fish' Feeeeeeedback... :)

Generally, we recieved good feedback from our preliminary task, but there were a few areas we could improve on to make it better.
The first thing we could improve, was in the first shot of the sequence. The shot of the 'C.I. Tower' was a pan up but did not show the whole of the building. A pan up would suggest that our character would be at the top of the stairs, not at the bottom. We now know, that we should of panned down the building instead.

The sequence which included the tracking shot up the stairs, recieved positive feedback because it was a steady shot that kept the character in the frame all the time. This stood out from other groups.

Another thing we could have improved, was the pan of Justin walking down the corridor. It is a very long and boring scene, and we should have made it shorter. Unfortnately Justin doesn't exit the frame at any point, which meant we couldn't cut it as there wasnt an appropriate point to.

Lastly, we were given encouraging comments about the lighting in the shot/reverse shot sequence of Justin and Jeffrey. Jeffrey was sitting in front of a window, which meant his features were almost in complete darkness. as Justin was opposite him, we could see the his face clearly, which made Jeffrey appear more mysterious.

Even though we could make improvements, overall we are happy with our task.